My Passion

Hi! In this opportunity I will tell you about my passion. My passion is write a poetry, but I often write it in Bahasa Indonesia because I know a poetry or Puisi in Bahasa Indonesia early than poetry in English language. I like reading a poetry so much. I like a poetry from Khalil Gibran. So I like write a poetry too. I ever publicated my poetry (puisi) in a public. Now, I try to write a poetry in English language. This is my first time post a poetry in a public with English language.
I write this poetry for my mother, because now I miss my mother so much.

You Are My Angel

Can I help you mother?

You look very tired

But you say nothing

Can I help you mother?

You have many problems

That I can’t know

Can I give you something?

No, I can’t mother

Sorry I can’t give you anything

Can you tell me how do you feel?

Mother have many problems

That’s can’t  she say

Because she doesn’t make me think about it

Can I love you mother?

Because only feel that I have

Only pray that I can give to you

Can I always beside you mother?

Without you, I feel nothing

And please always smile for me

Can I help you mother?

You are my angel

If you are tired

If you are sad

If you have many problems

You always say nothing

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Grammar Nazi

  Hi everyone ! In this opportunity I will post some posting from social media that there are some mistake in this sentence to write a caption.

 1. Picture 1

 In this picture "search the happy" is supposed to be "Look for happiness".


2. Picture 2

In this picture "join with us" is supposed to be "Join Us".

 3. Picture 3

In this picture "thanks God" is supposed to be "Thank God".


4. Picture 4

In this picture "energic" is supposed to be "Energetic".



5. Picture 5

 In this picture "I looked at you and realize that it still hurts" is supposed to be "I looked at you and realized that it still hurts."















This is my friend's social media that there a little mistake. There are some punctuation that's wrong  in this sentence to write a caption.

1. Picture 1

 This sentence that use in this caption is not correct because this sentence use a capital letter in all of this characters. It's must use a capital letter in the beginning of the sentence.














2. Picture 2

  This sentence that use in this caption is not correct because there is no a punctuation in a word "Im". It must be write "I'm".















3. Picture 3


This sentence that use in this caption is not correct because in letter i not use a capital letter. It must use a capital letter and the correct write is "I".
This sentence there are not use a fullstop in the end of sentences. It must use a fullstop in the end of each sentences.














4. Picture 4

This sentence that use in this caption is not correct.
Because there is a mistake in the punctuation. In this sentences, after comma there is a capital letter in the first word. It must not use a capital letter after comma. And it must use a fullstop at the end of the sentences. The correct sentence is "Collect moments, not things."

5. Picture 5
This sentence that use in this caption is not correct. There is a mistake in punctuation. There is a typo in word "nt". And this sentence not use a fullstop. In this caption write down "Im nt remember". The correct sentence is "I'm not remember."

Diary

A diary is a record (originally in handwritten format) with discrete entries arranged by date reporting on what has happened over the course of a day or other period. A personal diary may include a person's experiences, and/or thoughts or feelings, including comments on current events outside the writer's direct experience. Someone who keeps a diary is known as a diarist. Diaries undertaken for institutional purposes play a role in many aspects of human civilization, including government records (e.g. Hansard), business ledgers and military records. In British English, the word may also denote a preprinted journal format.


In this opportunity i post my diary.
This is my diary.. :)